dubdobdee ([info]dubdobdee) wrote,
@ 2007-11-05 14:00:00
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an essay in practical deconstruction
no 8. of my 17 electronic haikus:
and i won't see
her for ages i think it's
called suffering

haha this becomes a bit less uh-oh STRICKEN when you chase down the source of the second half!!



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[info]jeff_worrell
2007-11-05 04:19 pm UTC (link)
after the 20th refresh, having cringed through numerous examples of my horrible, repetitive style of music-criticism, I got this:

out for something to
say, things never change at all
interestingly

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[info]dubdobdee
2007-11-05 04:35 pm UTC (link)
one of the things that worked well for this (for me) is the clash between my high-speed interweb style, and my more "proper sentenc-y lapidary for the ages" review style

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